I'm falling!
Please catch me!
I'm falling!
Falling so low,
Falling into emptiness!
Please catch me!
I'm falling!
Dankness is surrounding me!
Light is a lost memory!
Please catch me!
Please reach out your hand,
and grab me,
pull me up!
I'm falling!
Don't you hear my screams?!
I'm falling,
alone,
into nothing,
no soul near me,
only you know.
Please save me!!
I'm falling!
Darkness is swallowing me whole!
When I hit the bottom,
I will be dead!
Reach out,
take me back to the light,
before it's too late!
I'm falling!
Why do you just stare?!
Why do you just watch me go?!
Help me please!
Don't you see?!
Soon it's too late!!
I'm falling into the deepest emptiness,
and you just watch...
please give me your hand,
that is all I ask of you!
Why don't you hear me?!
Light is no longer there.
I have become invisible,
Between the darkness.
I'm giving up on you,
My screams are of silence.
Let the wind blow on me with pleasure,
Till it's over.
Comments
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the last two lines dont really go with the rest of the poem...
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well, she's still falling.
and it's supposed to be the wind, as in , when ur falling at a high speed u feel wind, just becuz ur fallin. if u could share w/me how to make that a lil clearer to everybody, that'd be great.
but otherwise, those last 2 sentences are just showing that now instead of screaming 4 help now, she is completly giving up.
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