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Paradise

The sunlight hit
The conversation, waves lapping
At our feet. Our Fantas,
A forbidden laugh. My hand
On your leg. This, this was paradise.

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  • carole21
    December 19, 2007
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    ha ha

    good write . . like "A forbidden laugh" and "My hand On your leg" . . paradise is many things . . short but effective piece .. !


  • tara wilson gold member
    December 16, 2007

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    awee.. this is a beautiful moment..
    "The sunlight hit
    The conversation," ..I really like that opening line..

    moments like this, of love, simple moments that make us happy are indeed paradise..I really like this..