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Come Undone

Come undone
Unwind for me
I'm not complete
Unless I see

Of all who fell
I know the best
For in the dark
No one can hide

Your eyes are full
Your soul, it's bland
I feel hate, my dear, from you
Oh yes, your time is coming through

Go forth the moon
She's waiting, dear
The stars will shine
Your tides will calm

Come undone
Unwind for me
You're now complete
Go now to see.

Author notes

...I have no idea. You can decide what it means. xD Hope you like it though.
Luvs.
~Cj

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  • Dlvvanzor
    December 22, 2007

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    I'm confused, but I like what I did understand! And it felt like hope, but I don't know.

    Loves you sis!
    -Dlvvanzor