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The Grand Canyon

Like a young child coloring with crayons,
time scribbled lines upon ancient rocks.
Ocher pigments dust the canyon floor,
draping the bushes in smoky frocks.

Muffled murmurs ricochet off shear
cliff walls, echoing the softest sound.
Flora and fauna flow into view,
as serpentine waters eat up the ground.

Smooth shapes are intricately sculpted,
creating a maze full of twists and turns.
Embedded with tiny quarts crystals,
monoliths sparkle as daylight burns.

Sunset paints the Colorado River
in crimson shades, where rusty rocks bleed.
Its yearly deluge flows to the sea,
grinding out gorges at breakneck speed.

A star studded sky of twinkling lights,
forms a backdrop for a pocked faced moon.
Night pours its dark ink into the chasm,
encasing life in a black cocoon.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    Almost as majestic as the canyon it describes.

    Please keep entering the other rounds, love is already underway.

    Thanks for your entry we both enjoyed reading it
    Jeff and Sue


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 17, 2007

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    BREATH TAKING

    Your words have painted the most beautiful pictures in my mind and a leave me with a softness of Nature to think on...A wonderful place and the colors and people are so real and down to earth...Winner in my book


  • raggyann
    December 16, 2007

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    this was fantastic
    i love the grand canyon
    its beautiful and this poem just took me back to it
    oh your words were full of life and colour and images
    i just love this poem my friend


  • Olivias Violin
    December 16, 2007
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    I hope to visit the Grand Canyon one day.