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todays prayer

Lord,
lift me up and give me wings.
For,  I have seen a great many things.
Some of strength.
Some from fear.

Have I been to blind to hear?
Listen to your message. I must
see the things of righteousness.

Lord,
Lift me up upon your halo
so I may see
where your calling me to go.

Have I been to loud to see
whom it is I should be?

 

Lord,

lift me up and give me wings

so I may

again

see a great many things.

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  • Nicada silver member
    February 11

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    This is a such a beautiful prayer poem, written straight from the heart. These are prayers that many of us probably have prayed at one time or another throughout our lives. You did a nice job on this poem. Thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty


  • animated lies
    April 15, 2008

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    I'm not a spiritual person but this poem was powerfully written and was not cliche, which is good. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

    animated

  • Judith Chandler
    April 5, 2008

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    The best I would give this is honourable mention. It is well expressed but should have been proofread more carefully. There are a couple of mistakes.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 29, 2008
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    Thank you for entering your poem, best of luck in the contest

    ♥
    whisper


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 26, 2008

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    truely beautiful this is very inspiriational too. Good luck with it in the contest Dear Redwing


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 13, 2008

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    A beautiful Prayer

    This is a beautiful prayer--Heartfelt and Sincere--
    You have a lot of talent and I enjoy reading your work!


  • Hope Angel silver member
    January 18, 2008
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    Beautiuful and amazing! Good luck in my contest!


  • KimmyKat
    January 4, 2008

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    Beautiful

    But check your grammar. Sorry, I'm a stickler. Other than that, though? I like it.

    Just the grammar...


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    December 21, 2007

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    Thanks for putting your info in here. I must say, this was very beautiful and inspirational. It was also a wonderful reminder to me as well. Thank you!


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    December 20, 2007
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    put your option in your Author's Note's or I'm DQing you!


  • Xx Luna xX
    December 18, 2007

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    Wonderfull!!

    Wow, I love this poem! I will read it every morning! It should be the prayer we all pray everyday! Great job!


    • genevieve3
      December 18, 2007
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      Thats just about the nicest comment I have ever received, thank you.


  • warrior-eagle
    December 17, 2007

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    Awesome!
    This is absolutely amazing!
    And I just pray that I
    am NOT loud enough so I dont hear Him.
    God Bless you hun.

    ..Simply Me♥


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    December 16, 2007

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    WOW!! Bravo!!
    I absolutely loved this!! Absolutely beautiful.
    I have a group called Praise You In This Storm - the link to which can be found on my page. You should join and put this on our reading list!!!
    So beautiful.
    Write on!
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Ephiphany
    December 16, 2007

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    Well spoken I truly have enjoyed this Blessed word by you my new friend. Keep your head up, and let your light shine as it is well.

    Ephiphany


    • genevieve3
      December 16, 2007
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      I surly feel gods light shining on me,Thank you! HAve a great day!


  • vici377
    December 16, 2007

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    excellent

    what a wonderful inspirational hope-filled write..love it..Lord lift me up..and give me wings..wonderful prayer..thanx for sharing..

  • davidwright silver member
    December 16, 2007
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    An excellent expression of hopefullness. Very clearly written. I enjoyed the read

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