I want to see what they mean, and to write the lines inbetween.
I would like to win a few more golds, if only my words commited to do as told.
I have a form I love to follow, other ways to write are hard for me to swallow.
I can not simply pick up a pen and do what is asked, I must always speak whatever is lacked.
I want to be a strong soul in the world of pens, however I just can't compromise my glory I hold within.
I know to win is everyones goal, I just love to write to empty and renew soul.
Every single moment in time is worth a write of some sort, every word leading to a new port.
I am not sure this writing will be what someone wanted to read today, but I know it will be the writing I needed to say.
I shall never compromise the way I write for the sake of a win, and I shall never conform to a new way to begin.
You may not like what I put down on my paper, but I am only teaching my writing to be my savior.
Author notes
i wasn't sure what i should write but this flew out of my head those who enjoy it great those who dont read something else
A contest entry
- no title by lee-sharp.
1500 points, ended January 15, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So, you are driven to write and feel strongly about writing however and whatever you want. If I have read the sentiments expressed in your poem correctly and it is truly the way you feel, I would be wasting my time in any serious critique.
Good luck in the contest and in your poetry.
Jim -
Wonderful
Very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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I like this. I like how you have stated your personal feelings for writing and the fact that you won't conform just to take a 'gold', but will write the way that is best for you. Well said, well worded.
Good luck in your contest.
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