Dear Rain,
Crying skies
Falling tears.
Sob with us.
Or is it
Coinsidence
That our
Silent droplets
Fall
Down pale
And bluish cheeks
In unison?
Us two wishers
Feeling as one.
Us three?
Maybe not.
Author notes
Hurrrr short. Wrote it at last minute. Again like WRITE POEM BY 9AM TUESDAY! and I think I finished it at 3am.
A contest entry
- Pimp up my prewrites by leander.
650 points, ended February 21, 2008, 107 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it make you think?
Comments
-
deep
Great. I agree. -
This was quite short what you have written here, in the very beginning it felt a bit cliché, but towards the end it's actually quite out of the box
Thank you for entering the contest - I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
pretty poem
-
This was pritty deep and amazing. Great job!!!
Adding your comment:
