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If Your Walls Could Talk

If your walls could speak,
Would they talk about us
And the things we've done,
As silent they've stood witness?

Would they tell of how
You've anxiously turned me to face them,
Impatiently shoving against,
As soon as I've stepped through your door...

Your left hand holding my neck firmly,
The right dropping my defenses to my ankles,
Fingers exploring realms,
Soaking in delight?

Would they express how you've made me squirm,
And burn with an uncontrollable desire;
How I've moaned for you to go deep inside,
With swelling lips begging to be hushed?

Would they disclose how you force me to the floor,
Down on all fours,
While I've whimpered and writhed,
Like a dog, begging for more?

And of how I've pleaded with you,
To drive in from behind,
As they've watched without a sound,
Us imitating two animals in a mating ritual?

Would they voice how you've raised me from the ground,
Thighs straddling your waist,
As you slipped inside, legs wrapped around,
For a ride to your bedroom,

Leaving them to wonder what comes next?

Author notes

After the last few things i have posted here, thought it was time i redeemed myself...

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  • asymmetry
    December 28, 2007

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    I just love the woman whimpering and begging for more, like a dog. I have a poem with a reference about pounding against the walls too. Nicely done Kate


  • Tattboyspet
    December 22, 2007

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    "The right dropping my defenses to my ankles," - TOUCHE! Excellent write here my friend - well done!


  • Nicotine Eyes
    December 17, 2007

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    Hardcore Holder

    I liked the ending but my fav part was "Would they disclose how you force me to the floor,
    Down on all fours,
    While I've whimpered and writhed,
    Like a dog, begging for more?"

    Thansk for entering! good luck

    [♥]Nicotine.


    • dark cajun shadow
      December 17, 2007
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      mmmm that's always my favorite too!!! Thank You for taking the time to comment.


  • tomisb
    December 16, 2007

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    Interesting conceit, walls that care. Strong vision and emotional content. Rich expression of desire.
    Well done.
    Love, Tom B.

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