Sleigh bells cringe, souls are glistening,
on the knife blood is dripping.
A murderous sight
all grim delight,
screaming in a winter slaying spree.
Slash away with my cleaver,
look I've got a fever.
It's not easy to kill
but sure is a thrill,
howling in a winter slaying spree.
In the lounge I can slice and dice you,
so its not hard for me to chew.
You say 'wow this is hell'
I say 'no ti's swell'
but you can do the job
of dying very well.
later on I'll conspire
to eat you by the fire.
Your face so afraid
when you saw my nice blade,
yelling in a winter slaying spree.
I had a merry feast on your liver,
the taste made me pulse and quiver.
I've had lots of fun with you my friend,
so sorry our times come to an end
But your dead, ain't it thrilling,
though your screams were so chilling.
I'll frolic and play, in a murderous way,
killing in a winter slaying spree.
Author notes
Prompt; Twist Happy Christmas Carols...To Fear Inducing Carols
Goes to the tune of 'Walking In A Winter Wonderland'
I did check it with a syllable counter...just to be sure it fit.
Option 1: Merry Christmas
-Murder on Christmas.
A contest entry
- We Wish You A Scary Christmas by Dmonik.
1750 points, ended January 1, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Christmas Present of the not so Merry kind.(Options all around) by Danneh.
660 points, ended January 15, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Creepy Carols by BleedingKittii.
450 points, ended January 1, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations on winning silver, I would have given you Gold
It's so nice to meet another as twisted as me. This really was funny as hell, I sang it all the way through, let's hope the neighbours didn't hear.
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hahahahahahaha this is awesome! i've always tried to write sumthign like this, but never could. i like how you matched it with the background too, way to go
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I sang right along and never missed a beat. lol this was great. thanks so much for sharing your talent with the group.
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I absolutely adore it. I was singing it and it fit very nicely. I love the last two lines.
"I'll frolic and play, in a murderous way,
killing in a winter slaying spree."
That's just....perfect. Indeed what was asked for in a creepy carol. Good luck and Happy Holidays.
~Kittii
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I love this so much... I honestly wouldn't mind losing to this!
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OMG, this is great. I F**K*** love this. great job on this poem. good luck in the contest.
great descriptions...
[evil laugh]
kat
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OMG!!!No you didn't go there my friend.I am going to take theses borders away from you!!QMG!!You have captured the Dark for real your poem was already scary but Santa .......................Haunting!!!
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Thank you for entering. Good Luck
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AH HAHA
OH-MEE-GEEZ I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS!
Does that make me twisted??
This is a fuckin AMAZING poem filled with cannibalism, murder, butchery and the mighty spirit of christmaka!!! ^_^
THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR ENTRY! Kudos and good luck
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Thanks for your entry. I shall read it thoroughly upon judging.
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This is brilltastic lol, it fits wuith the tune, is sick, AND funny, but then maybe that's just me lmao Well done and good luck
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Good God Almighty!!!! The Queen Of Evil just killed Christmas. Wonderful Imagery and penned so cleverly!!!
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