When rainbow upends itself
like poured bowl of light
to still the dark and dreadful deeds
of man and mouths that lie
while letting blood,
then, and only then, will eye see
what hand has built
to stop colors from shift of dullness
and become sparkle of happy souls.
Come down arch of hope, again.
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picture provided by contest holder.
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Picture Prompt by azure85.
300 points, ended December 17, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A great use of the prompt, as the rainbow pours itself out upon the world. There is a good message at the end, thank you so much for this thoughtful poem.
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How much I wish we had a happy world. ty my friend.
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Excellent
What an incredible ending. So sums on the image so well. Best of luck in the contest.
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ty penman. simplicity simply does it for me sometimes.
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"Come down arch of hope, again."
Pure & profound, my Friend. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. 
Wanda
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ty gf....hope all is well over there in the winter torn area....we got 11 inches and more to come..the wind has come up and shifting it around this afternoon and evening...
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