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Closed Eyes

perhaps
you can't find me
with closed eyes
open your heart
you live in mine

 


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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Nawr - very beautiful ending. I like the serene feeling this poem holds carefully.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.