Here, trying to decipher the hieroglyphics of life.
A contest entry
- Where are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 31 entries
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I feel the first word is useless and just adds a dull beginning but apart from that, the honesty of this piece is beautiful.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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So True
This is great. A one-liner but so true. We are all here trying to figure 'Life' out. Trying to break that code. Trying to understand when something works out the way it does, how it can be so confusing. But, that is life.
Wayne Leon
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Only one line, but full of metaphor. Good job Anna!
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I like how you can write shot stuff. I can't do that. It always has to be around ten lines and even then I don't like it but you can write meaningful short poems and I like that about your poetry. Good job.
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love your take on the prompt! lol hieroglyphics you got that one right!!! made me smile! best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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