I am like a rose caught in the wind
My stem bends under the force of it all
I’m like a rose caught in the rain
My petals are damaged and scared
Like a rose caught in the hail
My wounds weep, the damage is done
Like a rose trapped in the shade
My colour slowly fades
I slowly wilt away
A contest entry
- prewrites by aeolia.
400 points, ended October 26, 2008, 130 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems That Begin With The Letter 'L'. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended December 15, 2008, 112 entries
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Comments
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Describes me so well as well.
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Oh precious little rose ...
be a rose in spring
when sun brings
to you
the lustre that sings
of new life and the hue
of hope ...
Love to you, Precious One.
Myra
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hey i liked this the way you compare your life with a rose and how when bad things happen to you it kinda happens to the rose
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thanks and your right it is a good way to describe it
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