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These Tears

These tears my run down my face,
And fall onto the land.
But i'd prefer if these tears,
Would fall into your hands!

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  • SignifyingNothing
    October 18, 2008
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    This is sad and sweet.

    Thanks for entering.


  • EphemeralStyle
    December 20, 2007

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    Yay i'm glad you're writing again. I like this poem; it's really cute and romantic. Your writing has a really innocent feel to it. Noice!