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Anywhere but here

Yellow

outside my window
dawn till dusk.

Rural frown
upon dry flesh

~Trapped~

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    I like this, beautiful yet something feels empty within it. The effect is nice yet not strengthened in words.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.