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Written in the Sky

Till now, it was his voice that had me spellbound
Tender exchanges of sound, questioning if love was what we had found
Within minutes I will see him, alone and face to face
In this whirlwind of time, rationality seems gone without a trace

On the nervous lookout, at this crossroad I anxiously wait
For the moment is here, near seconds will reveal my fate
Oh please be all that I have hoped you would be
This young girls fairytale lingers between dreams and reality

The sun reflects on the windscreen of his car, prolonging our meeting
No turning back. He is here now and there's no reason for fleeting
We smiled before we spoke, he looked as curious as me
Strangely not awkward though, adrenalin pumping so silently

Words came and went at each perfect moment in time
As flowing as our first date was, I still awaited an obvious sign
He was everything I'd dreamed of to not only walk with, but to fly
Why then did I still need it written in the sky?

This was a fork in the road and it wasn't till we had to part
that the signal I was searching for seeped into my heart
It came without having planned a second date or even kissing him
The moment of truth was when I realised that I was actually

Missing him........

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Yellow-Rose

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Comments

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  • Pureisolation
    March 1, 2008

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    wonderful poem. i really liked reading this. i really do understand this poem and i really liked reading it. sucks when you miss someone. it really does. anyways thanks.


    • Yellow-Rose
      March 26, 2008
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      OMG!!!!! Thank you so much for the bronze. You've made my day.


  • Blooming Poet
    February 28, 2008
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    yes this is amazing.


  • FindinSoundInSilence
    January 8, 2008
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    wow! very nice. i love ur last sentance!


  • Perfectly Imperfect
    January 2, 2008

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    I really like this, it's exactly the kind of entry I was hoping to receive. I love how it ended, but the whole thing was great Well done and thank you for your entry x


  • Flames-of-Furey
    December 18, 2007

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    that is an awsome poem it was well structured and said everything hope you place here its really good

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