i think Ive screwed up
what i didnt know had started
a love that could have been
has now probably been discarded.
im so sorry
i thought
you felt it to
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im so sorry...
what is your opinion of this?
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You said so much with so few words.
Very good job indeed.
You never have to say you're sorry for loving someone.
Loved this very much. -
-bows- my lady so few words yet so much sorrow with in them i know were you are in this and i would not even wish that grif on even my enamys
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thank oyu! the pain from this has yet subsided but now the thing that really sucks is the guy i love is going to jobcore in march and it sux....but thank you for a wonderful comment
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Very nice. Short, simple, to the point. I like it. Good write.
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thank oyu very much!
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Anytime
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Well this is what the life is..and love is ..you are quite impressive expressing the beauty of your heart, yet that beauty is wrapped with the tears as well..but this what poetry is written .and this how we live in this world..you are amazing with your this love peom..great work is here..well done...
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thank oyu. i just hope the one who is supposed to see it, does!
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im sure it will be ok
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