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Hurt me

As if by some twisted turn of fate,
this pain doesn't seem so inhumane.
I lack the intended feeling of disarray
that you hoped I might soon obtain.

The numbness of it all caries me away,
despite the obscenities I've come to take.
Thus, with confidence, I'm able to stray
knowing that my path is within my wake.

So hurt me all you can,
for soon it will be too late.
And you'll be realizing then,
what it is that awaits.

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I.d.k. seriously. I'm just in a slump right now.

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  • Scyphon
    November 5, 2008
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    Great poem ending with karma. I love it.


    • Ebyru
      November 6, 2008
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      thank you~

      at least i haven't felt like this in a while..lol.

      -bows-


  • rose petal desires
    December 16, 2007

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    i really hate to see people in genre hurt i am so tender lovin to where when you hurt i most certainly hurt great expression

    • Ebyru
      December 16, 2007
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      thank you for your kind comment.
      and thank you for reading.
      I just needed to get it off my chest.

      It's hard having a loved one with you that doesn't seem to love you anymore..