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This I Own

I'm blood, sweat, the tears
that holds my family together
Never to divide, never to fall

      Christine E. Wessels
            12/15/2007

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JUST THE TRUTH ABOUT WHO I AM. I WILL FIGHT TO THE DEATH FOR MY FAMILY

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  • individuality gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    a good poem, aye, that is our right, to fight for the oens we love and adore, it is only right that we should protect our own.


  • Melodies
    December 19, 2007

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    I'd be proud...

    Proud to be a member of a family like this! Fine poem, written with love and sincerity.


  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Honest and strong. You show strength in your words - a nice reflection on yourself. Well done.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    December 16, 2007
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    i love this because its the real power in it i like reading strong work as this