if only you knew
what your love does to me
cant you see
your all i need?
i read your word
i see your picture
and every time i do
i fall for you.
so i dont know what to do
please tell me if you do!
what is your opinion of this?
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Short but to the point more in the stature of a haiku really nice i like its cute
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This is really good... I love the fact that you openly express your love...
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love ish so amazing i never understood it it has tworn me lim from lim befor riped out my heart and fed it to the shadows but love ish so much i cud never do with out i love your poetry so far and plane to read more
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this is really cute.. probably not exactly what you were looking for, but i liked it.. it reminds me of middle school when you like the boy or girl across the room and you write them a note to let them know.. this brings me back to "the good ole days" in a way.. back to memories.. and situations and feelings that i can relate to.. good word choice.. kudos to you.. great write..
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