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Child's Eye

The barker's carousel colors
clash merrily in an array of block-large
stripes
Pulling, enticing
and solid strong horses
Light lavender dragons
and
sleek smoothie ponies
with paint-chipped locks
The laughter! What lights!
What funny plink music
Get lost in the weaving
and found
in the mirrors

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 17, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'Day mate ♥

    Beautifully penned. I love the imagery this creates in the mind and may I say that child is absolutely gorgeous

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda