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Holy, Holly Night


We’re all excited.
No way we can sleep.
Started counting reindeer
when we ran out of sheep.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
And this is a holy, holly night.

Finally found all the presents
we wanted to buy.
All are so happy.
It’s obvious why.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
And this is a holy, holly night.

Both sets of relatives
came to our house last year.
This year WE’LL go visit
the ones we hold dear.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
And this is a holy, holly night.

I feel my eyelids
beginning to close.
Everything is wonderful.
I do hope it snows.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
Tomorrow is Christmas.
And this is a holy, holly night.


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MERRY CHRISTMAS 2007!!

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  • Simply.Nora.
    December 17, 2007
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    This is my favorite part... =]
    "Started counting reindeer
    when we ran out of sheep.
    it showed excitement the holiday, and i connect because i felt like this for the holiday as a toddler. i loved the formating and the repetition. it had a great meter too. good one. =]


    • lindaburns gold member
      December 19, 2007
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      Thank you so much for the Bronze Trophy. I was hoping the repetition didn't count against me. Do have a very Merry Christmas! Linda