i'll be there

when the time seems wrong,
when nothings going right,
know that I'm here for you,
to help you make those choices.

when life gets to tough,
when you just want to let go,
let me know,
ill be there to help you
make those choices.

when life wears you out,

when you feel let down

and destroyed,

ill be there

even when life is going great,

when you just couldnt be happier,

ill be there

Author notes

this is for all my friends...

A contest entry

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N e a r
February 3, 2008

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Awww, this is such a sweet write to your friends. And what a true friend you seem to be, hun. And I say that because I personally do not know you, but your words are encouraging and special.

Thanks for entering. Good luck.
justin benecke
December 25, 2007
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Great poem
Dark Prince Chaos
December 16, 2007

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they say a friend will bail you out of jail but a true friend will be there right next to you saying we F***ed up but we had fun doing it a friend a love will allwase be there for you
PrabhuDayal Khattar
December 16, 2007

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Indeed you are very through with your work here revealing the prompt quite successfully..I love your work..and thanks for the wonderful sharing of the thought provoking work...
Lady Australis
December 16, 2007
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very nice hunni
good luck