In the night a million tears.
On the trip a trillion years.
Seeing you a billion fears.
Is how much I loved you.
You broke my heart in broad daylight.
You made me cry through every night.
You blurred my eyes and lost my sight.
And still I really do.
100 days would have been great.
200 days could have been late.
300 days would have been fate.
I love you through and through.
A smile would have fixed my past.
Your style could have made me last.
The mile must have gone to fast.
And yes...I love you too.
A contest entry
- Just Give Me Something To Read by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended January 18, 2008, 89 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Calling all Romeos and Juliets by PonyPride.
425 points, ended January 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awe
This was truly beautiful. I really enjoyed it, well done. The only feedback I could give you is that some of it is a bit forced. -
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thanx
For the comment.
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great
pretty, as always.
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