held by surface tension,
poised as a line in glass,
balancing halves
of full and empty.
In a list
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 33 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think (Critical Honesty Appreciated)
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Kate, a simple image of a glass expounded upon to infer such self description. Nice.
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Honest and raw. Realism in the words spoken [written]. I like the simplistic ideas you have crafted around and the reflection it is on yourself.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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you balance with grace, very nicely done here kate, the title is perfect compliment to this lovely write.
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this is, of course, beautifully written... but i have never been one to see that the glass was either half full or half empty... but rather that the glass was there... it is ours to with what we want, no matter how it is percieved in quantity... not optimistic, not pessimistic, but instead realistic...
great write, great flow and great EvilKate as usual...
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nicely done, however......
the question presents itself;
"Are yee half full, or half empty?"
Len
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ditto what cat said
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brilliant- what an incredible concept.. absolutely love this... wow..
wouldnt change a thing-
m
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Beautifully written - so much in these words. Yes, balance, always striving towards it...
~ Nicolette
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Thought provoking, and pleasent to read.
this one leads the minds in several new directions! well done!
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Wow! What a great description of taking measure of yourself! That's what's great ... when you can zero right in on it with so few words!
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I like this. It gives a lot without to many words. To tell you the truth I like it as is, it may need just a little more, but not to much.
Good job!
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