Waiting through eternity
Expecting you to say
Not many words
But only three –
‘I love you.’
A contest entry
- Where are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 31 entries
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300 points, ended December 24, 2007, 23 entries
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550 points, ended December 10, 2008, 52 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Dude I just talked to the editor of shitty poets weekly. Your in!!!
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Aww thats really pretty. A little sad as well. Good luck and well done !!
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a good poem, i love you should be said any day, everyday, with your title i think it is only said at certain times of the year
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just reread
it's still as good xx -
One you get together forever, have to remember to day this daily. SUre helps to keep you together, even when you are mad at each other, you can still love each other. Easy to read and understand what you have expressed so well in these lines.
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This was a wonderful reminder of how great it feels to have someone special for the holidays. Thanks for posting in my contest and all the best at judging. Merry Christmas, Cathy
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I also agree that the 'three major words' are, in this context, self evident. Still think it's a blinding good piece of work though.... have a six hander...
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I feel the end line is unneeded and the secrecy should be thought over not offered freely.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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