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Happy Christmas!


Waiting through eternity
Expecting you to say
Not many words
But only three –
‘I love you.’

A contest entry

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  • a good poem, i love you should be said any day, everyday, with your title i think it is only said at certain times of the year


  • chills
    January 4
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    just reread

    it's still as good xx

  • grannyeri gold member
    January 3

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    One you get together forever, have to remember to day this daily. SUre helps to keep you together, even when you are mad at each other, you can still love each other. Easy to read and understand what you have expressed so well in these lines.


  • daviscth gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    This was a wonderful reminder of how great it feels to have someone special for the holidays. Thanks for posting in my contest and all the best at judging. Merry Christmas, Cathy

  • chills
    December 18, 2007

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    I also agree that the 'three major words' are, in this context, self evident. Still think it's a blinding good piece of work though.... have a six hander...


  • Naridill gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    I feel the end line is unneeded and the secrecy should be thought over not offered freely.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.

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