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Forsaken

Trapped, consumed,
by this monster within.
Combatting to no avail,
Forsaken to depression in darkness.

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Prompt..Where are you? At this time in my battle with my illness this is where I am, this is where I have been left for now.

My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    December 30, 2007
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    Wonderful Imagary


  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    A little adjectively but nicely crafted with personal aspects.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.

  • BeautifulCurse
    December 18, 2007

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    hmm....interesting.. short and to the point.. although it actually says alot in its four lines.. this really gives insight into your mind right now... which seems to not be a very pleased place... hope things get better.. .great write and good luck..


  • Prison of Lyme
    December 16, 2007
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    I am w/ you

    I haven't been feeling so good either lately, this weather sux!