Through thought
Through love
Through friends
Through life
I have found
The answers I seek
Only to be disappointed
But still I try
To change the world
To do the impossible
Isn’t always improbable
A contest entry
- Looking to be impressed... by ellipsist.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think in general? Improvements?
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urapns66
Nice Poem very inspirational Thank you for commenting on mine.
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An interesting piece...
An interesting piece; that's why in a world of darkness, we need to have faith - so that His Light is the guiding force in our lives. Nicely done! --Joe
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Good write, nice flow
PoeticButterfly -
I like the tone - hopeful and inspirational and motivating... the piece itself, though, particularly the beginning, is a bit repetitive for my tastes and I feel that the piece would actually benefit from a little bit of paring down, at least in that first stanza...
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This is a nice poem i like the flow of it!
Good Luck in the Contest
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