Let me be the one to say,
"everything is going to be alright."
And let me be the one,
to hold you in the dead of night.
Let me be the one,
To mean what they say.
When the words"I Love You,"
are truly displayed.
Let me be the one,
to hold you up when you are weak.
and let your tears fall on my shoulder,
when you feel them run down your cheek.
Let me be,
the right one for you.
When you say,
"I Love You Too"
Please my love, i want to be yours
Please, just let me be him
A contest entry
- I want emotion! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended December 20, 2007, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
ahh, I know how this feels... (Except, I usually wish to be "her" not "him" but yeah... haha you get what I mean... lol) this is really good. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in my contest!
Crimson -
Welcome to AllPoetry
Quite heartfelt and emotional. The sincerity is apparant. This would make a good song with the right music.
-
A heartfelt write revealing the depth of the heart..and the heart is once again in great distress..this distress which is the cause and reason for the story of the life and the truth of life and that is very unpredictable..and this has come here with your strong words..well done my friend....
Adding your comment:
