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Lost In Love


In your arms I fall
head over heals in love
captivated by your

beautiful brown eyes

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Prompt: Where are you?
16 Words

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  • Ithica silver member
    December 21, 2007

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    In love like this is where I'd want to be...!!! Eyes DO captivate! You have capture the essence of the prompt wonderfully in 16 words! Nicely done...


  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Nawr. Very simple and sweet. You have crafted these with beauty.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • creationsfromheart
    December 16, 2007
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    awww

    So sweet and filled with so few words, awsome!