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~My Little Grandson Trent~

My darling little grandson Trent

is such a precious little boy.

The time with him that I have spent

has brought me so much joy.

 

He makes cute and funny faces

while I hold him in my arms,

and in my heart he places,

all his love with all his charms.

 

We'll have so much fun together

with cars and trucks and trains

I'll be there in stormy weather,

and through all his growing pains.

 

God blessed us with this baby boy,

and I'm so proud to say,

that this grandma will enjoy,

my grandson Trent in every way.

 

I Love you Trent

from Mema

 

~December 15th 2007~

 

 

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  • badnovocaine
    January 15

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    Aw this is so beautiful, you know despite my user name, I love kids!!! I have so many little cousins and I just adore them.
    I think that this is a sweet write.

  • Lady Mak
    November 9, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem, such a lovely heartfelt write that abounds with love and happiness for the gift of your precious grandson, thank you for sharing this happiness and love that abounds in your heart.


  • tawk gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    Fellow bandit sister this is beautiful and I could feel all the love you have for your amazing grandson Trent! Amazing flow and rhyme and imagery throughout. Theresa


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 26, 2008

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    Hood Wink!

    Awwwwww.
    I just wanna cry as I feel the love you have for your Grandson

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    February 16, 2008

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    This was a touching, loving piece of poetry. Filled with lots of love for this little young man you love so much. Great write. Thank you for sharing I love your background too. Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~


  • xRAYEx
    February 2, 2008

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    Aww... that was so cute! I love the name Trent too. I wish my mother was around to write about her grandchildren... when i giver her some, that is.


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    A lovely picture of your grandson and wonderful poem to accompany it too. Something he will cherish I am sure when he is older; a lovely gift from his grandma. Good rhythm, rhyme and flow in these lines; sentiments well expressed.


  • The Poetic Bandits gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    9pts...

    Beautiful baby...thank you for this magical contribution to The Poetic Bandits reading list

    ~Lilac


  • Polaja Greeters member
    January 19, 2008

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    This is such a beautiful dedication to your grandson... maybe you could make him a scrapbook of poems for a later birthday - I'm sure he would love it! (then again, maybe you already had that idea - hehe)... I love the sentiment and the rhyme

    Keep writing

    Polly


    • Twinstar
      January 19, 2008
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      Thanks for your sweet comments on this poem, I actually gave this poem to my daughter for Trent at Christmas in a frame and so he has it in his room hanging on the wall. Thanks again!

      Love & Light
      Debbera


  • Poetry and I Inc
    January 18, 2008

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    Awwww, what a beautiful
    tribute to your grandson!
    He is truly precious. I
    just love how babies and
    children put people into
    an entirely different mood.
    Thanks for sharing,

    Keep penning!

    ~The Inc."


  • WolfHeart
    January 16, 2008

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    Precious baby - precious write. What a gift from God are babies - I will keep Trent in my prayers and wish you all the best of what life brings.

    Wolfie

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    January 15, 2008

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    that face alone is worth three yellow clappy guys, but since I am here I guess I could tell you what I think of the poem ... that is if I can drag myself away from this adorable angelic face ...lol Oh, yeah, the poem... wait, one more look, okay, wait, just another peek, okay what was it ya wanted? Isn't he adorable?
    Okay, okay....the poem, gotcha covered. yeah yeah, I forgot what it said, it was cute or something, but hey that baby up there, it is just precious!

    Just kidding dear, the poem was beautiful just like the baby it was written for and I am sure it will be placed in a book somewhere for him to cherish when he grows up. Well done my friend and congratulations grandma!


  • Lost Memory
    January 14, 2008

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    Beautiful, simply beautiful. It makes me hurt though. All of my grandparents died before i had been born. I have had many grandparent-figures in my life though. He is a lucky boy, congratulations.

    ~Nick


  • The Hermit
    January 14, 2008

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    He is so freaking adorable!

    Like others said that he is lucky to have a grandma like you. Penned with the right emotion


  • RatherImaginative silver member
    January 14, 2008
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    This is such a sweet poem, and would have a perfect place in his baby book, I think, if his mother keeps one for him. That photo is too cute! He is blessed indeed to have a grandma dedicated to loving him throughout his life. Thank you for sharing this!


  • Shamanicmusings
    January 14, 2008

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    He is edible!
    My neighbour will be having her wee one in June, so I'm saving up excuses for a hug.

  • angelelectra
    January 14, 2008

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    That was so beautiful! And he's such a cute baby boy, like a little angel. Trent is definitely lucky to have a grandma like you. am sure the two of you are going to have much fun together.
    Good write again my friend. Hope every thing's going on fine.


  • superstition
    January 4, 2008

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    Aww, he is precious, and he's blessed to have such a loving grandmother who writes these kinds of poems about him!! My family was just gifted with a new baby, as well, from my Aunt and Uncle. It's amazing how happy the little one made my grandma when she was holding him in her arms. It made Christmas that much more special.


  • ShelleyA gold member
    December 16, 2007

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    A beautiful heartfelt write and presentation. Good imagery, flow, rhyme. Lovely depth of feeling. Your love for your grandson shines in this piece. Lovely rhythm. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed.


    • Twinstar
      December 16, 2007
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      Thank you shelley, for your swett comments on my poem for my grandson. isn't he adorable?
      Love & light
      Debbers


      • ShelleyA gold member
        December 16, 2007
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        Yes, he is adorable and a blessing. Take care and God bless.

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