I'm Fire
I'm Ice
Not everything Nice.
I Hate
Love
Fear
I don't want your tears.
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What'cha think?
Comments
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Very simple and repetitive. I feel more effort is needed - for impact or even impression.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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Well ...this reads well and has a lot of emotions..
All the best!
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Nice flow, very nice, especially for a hurricane, that of which one expect to be very chaotic. but your words flow as if upon a gentle breeze... very much like you, this poem, you truly are a hurricane baby. my hurricane baby.
Lov you
-Falecurst
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I'm putting a comment on my own poem. This sucks, just for a contest. I hate this poem. Written off the top of my head in a second.
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