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Shite

Strewn across isolation,
shedding faceless moments,
like fecal matter,
called home.

A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    The first two lines are so well crafted - I feel the ending is like stitching that has forgotten the beauty before and come un-stitched.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.