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Black Flood((( Spoken Word Battle))) Slang

Black Flood

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

Here I go

As I light the black candles of I am

Wicked in my state of self conscious mind.

Let me give sight to the blind

That a black flood storm of fuck you in tar

Blood going to soak you in due time.

Here I go walking the machetes of

Nightmare on Elm Street.

Do you taste the earth quakes of my

Abstract concrete? Because when

I slice your veins and watch you die

And take a puff of my nicotine high

Rock a bye bay be

I just baptized my sanity

Why toasting cheers to the fruit punch of your blood please

Don’t approach me with your whats up are

Your damn cuz

I just shot you down in the name of emotions Plasma

You bitter sick twisted minded bitch

Drama country Alabama

This here is my spoken word grammar

I blow torch your skin with

It’s all over

As I num yo ho ran kay yo you

With my abused Tina Turner

Style flow

As I kill your loneliness

Just please don’t be a groupie

Keep it movin because

You really don’t want to

Approach me

Are go to your grave

By keep

Sending your strangers after me

Can you just please go take a nap 

And give me some leave me alone

Are you will be floating in my murderous

River zone of a

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

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Black Flood((( Spoken Word)))
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  • wordsmithiest
    January 5, 2008

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    So excellent. Use of language, line breaks, etc. et
    cetera and a big et cetera!!! Powerful stuff!!


  • WisdomWarrior
    January 4, 2008

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    I bid you peace... Nice to see a spoken word artist on the scene. Not tha appreciated here.

    This was a very intense battle piece. Being a battle piece I expected the language. You've gotta a couple of typo's (slang aside):

    "Why toasting cheers" - I think you meant While toasting.

    "Don’t approach me with your whats up are
    Your damn cuz" - I think you meant are you damn crazy cuz.

    All in all i loved the emotion and intensity of the piece.

    Keep Penning,

    John


  • onesugar gold member
    December 18, 2007
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    Hard hitting sis

    hope you are Ok hun

    ~sugar~


  • Lost-In-Lust
    December 17, 2007
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    Speechless.....


  • D Saul So Sexy
    December 16, 2007
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    DAMN!!!! killa its goin b iight
    this was HOT!


  • TwiztidMaggot
    December 16, 2007

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    This is wonderfully written sis! I love it. Thank you oh so much for entering my contest!!!!!!!! I love it so much! You are in the finalists! Keep up your amazing work girl!

    Crimson


  • rainbow bi trinity
    December 16, 2007

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    quit lettin that wacky chic
    get to you mommy she sendin strangers this that
    enemies in luv type drama ya enemy missin ya


  • Lil Atl 30319
    December 16, 2007

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    i wish one wouldn't trouble you with such non sense and silliness its really awefully sad that one has so much energy to take out silly task to try and destroy you. i would honestly just get tired of getting what you would say CHOPPED UP lyrically like this my love
    just remember know whats real you have one task and thats your son okay let grown ups be children and one day they will see the big picture and just move on I love you


  • rose petal desires
    December 16, 2007

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    thats whats^ aunt yes indeed i will be glad when the stranger give you some leave me alone as well its to silly and very childish i enjoyed your emotions

    your family
    Ash

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