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I found God in the sunrise,

but then he disappeared.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Emile
    December 21, 2007

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    Very good

    Your simplest words can carry the most weight when you make the reader feel them as well as hear them; and you do this so well. Excellent in both from and delivery. The words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. Nice flow of words and a pleasant sounding poem with all the right syllable count. Your simplest words can carry the most weight when you make the reader feel them as well as hear them; and you do this so well. Excellent in both from and delivery. The words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination. Good Job!


  • Naridill gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Love it ~ you have crafted beautiful imagery and it shows. Vibrant and stunning, weaving such simplicity and honest emotion.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.

  • Zarokk666
    December 16, 2007
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    one word - COOL