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Open Your Eyes

There are so many times I don't know what to do
Should I fall to my knees and scream
Or just stand tall and proclaim my love for you
Some of the things I see are driving me to insanity
Yet I know you'll always be with me
It isn't fair
I want to be knowen
I'm so sick of being your secret
Held close out of sight
But pushed aside if the time isn't right
At times I wonder
Why do I hold on
What is it about you that wont leave me alone
The way you smile
Feelings of comfort when I'm in your arms
As much as it sucks at times
It never seems to matter
As long as I know sooner or later I'll once again be in your arms
Wrapped up safe and warm
With a sence of hope only you can supply
Sometimes I just want you to wake up
To relize these things that are hurting me
I know they aren't done intentinally
But damn just open our eyes for once
Look at what it's doing to me
I wont say a word to you
For the fear that I'll push you away
Cause I know with out you I wouldn't have the strength to go on
But still the fact that love comes and goes so easily
Kills me inside
At times your love is more than I can take
But then it's so little a waste
Time is a precious thing but only when it's used with the best of intentions
So take this time I'm handing to you
Hold it close
And just please open your eyes and see

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  • Society is Insanity
    February 5, 2009
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  • Gothictears
    April 24, 2008
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    shis is amazing i can relate to so well

  • Big Hearted one
    February 16, 2008
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    that was a very deep poem.

  • pruedence
    December 18, 2007

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    It is funny how some people have no problem with taking and never really giving back what the other person truly needs. Once you find yourself secure in another form, may it be another relationship or just something..then you may see the real person that you are hanging on to. I hated reading the part , that he hides you...not good sign...lovely words of love..thanks for sharing


    • Sharkbaitoolala gold member
      December 18, 2007
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      thanks for the comment and i can see were and why you would say that him hidding me isn't a good thing but then again you would have to know the whole story which is not written here
      hes an amazing guy and im starting to be knowen
      please don't critisize or see him as a bad person
      this would be my fault for not telling more than the negative in this poem
      i just had a momment that hit and i had to write
      but please know he is awesome to me and things are getting better in both cases for me and him
      thanks again for the comment i am glad you enjoyed it
      love the SHARK

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