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Empty Light

I found god in broken dreams
where the end is a road
with a broken lamp...

and there was no light.

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  • Naridill gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Very simple and mind provoking ~ the ending was intriguing as is the rest.

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  • doyouloveit
    December 15, 2007
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    i wish you the best with this one i really enjoyed reading it very much good luck