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My stand

My feet
always at their prime,
for without each step,
life's plain would be rocky.

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Where are you?


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  • Naridill gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Beautiful ending - you have really given life to such a beautiful piece. I love the word choice and meaning.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • raggyann
    December 16, 2007

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    this was great i loved your word choice great job
    i liked this poem just like you wrote it no parts better than another


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 15, 2007

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    Sure would be rocky indeed Great write dear i wish you the best of luck in the contest Keep up the great writes

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    This is a good take on where are you.Thanks for sharing this with me goodluck in this contest best wishes and much love


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    December 15, 2007
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    Excellent


  • quack silver member
    December 15, 2007
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    this is good sis i love you

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