I dwell in the solitude that is my own:
Behind the mask that is insanity.
Author notes
This is for a similar contest. it is only so small because those were the rules... i'll make it longer when it ends, as i had promised with the other serisouly short poem ^__^
A contest entry
- Where are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Where do you dwell?
Comments
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I don't feel the two lines join up well but it is beautifully short - I am unsure why you would wish to lengthen it. Many struggle to make simplicity beautiful.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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Wow
this is deep ...well written...
All the best!
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