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Another Name

In this world of desolent lies and useless words,
i am just another name

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Explains what you are but not who. And I am confused - the words give strength but the meaning shows weakness. I loved it when I first read it but my second impression was alot less. Very intriguing though

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • livia michelle
    December 17, 2007
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    oh my gosh...who are you and what did you do with ayat?!? this is deep


  • MourningSun
    December 16, 2007

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    I like it. It is sad abut it is really good...... thanks a lot... You depressed me. But it is a really good, short, poem.