You are a fabrication of my mind.
You should realize that by now
[or i should]
You have simply disemboweled my need to live.
As you know, I only live for you.
Don't you need me any more?
These alabaster metaphors are so transluscent now
filled with heat and desire.
My brain has matured enough to know,
you aren't the one I hoped for,
nor adore any longer.
Don't cry, my love.
These prosthetic bruises will heal in time.
You always knew that I was a flimsy excuse for a lover.
Is there a need for me to reiterate my reasons,
except to keep me here another day?
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TChaplinette
A contest entry
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Lovely!!!!
Thank you for entering my contest!!!
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8.7/10
Very well written. I like the ideas thought out throughout this poem. The only thing I can recommend for my future rounds contest is lengthening it more. Otherwise, this was very good. Welcome to the finalists♥ -
thank you for entering. a very powerful piece you have written here. nice vocabulary too. great job and good luck
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sometimes there doesn't seem to be a light at the end of the tunnel for some, watched my sister struggling with coming and going for a long time. Very wonderful poem
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Thanks:f
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Your words have done well to paint a vivid image but this one line stood out to me above the rest...
'You always knew that I was a flimsy excuse for a lover.'
I don't know why but that image there is very unique and truly deserves a bit of recognition in my opinion. Thank you for entering. Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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the ending is phenominal.
you did amazing.
finalists for sure.
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thanx!<3
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Wonderful write. I like what its about and it in general. Great job.
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whoa!...heavy.
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very good i wish u luck in all the rest of the contests and thanks for entering
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option 2.
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Which option number please?????
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sad. keep your chin up
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
Merry Christmas!
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