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Broken place

Broken in a desolate world.

Shifting my stomach has curdled.

I am lost in eternal darkness.

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Very depressing but comes across with strength in words. Very nicely crafted.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.