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Suffering be my home!

Bristled in torture
Melting my flesh,
Tormented by love
I am purgatory,
I am in Hell!

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sad days... this poem sounds hot, huh?

A contest entry

how did these lines make you feel after you read them?

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    A little bland, crafted around such an intriguing concept but it just sits still. But beautifully worded.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    well indeed.....come and join me.. i have a spot with your name on it just kidding i trod this road alone...
    well done and best wishes

    tory