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Where the Heart Is

Starting over,
fixing a wasted life.
Miles from nowhere,
finding everything
I ever needed.
I am home.

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I am 350 miles from home, staying with my friends and they want me to move out here because we all know I need to get away from life back home and strike out on my own and make it by myself. It will be a difficult journey, but I think I'll be a better person from it.

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Very personal poem, crafted beautifully. I am not too fond of authors notes, takes away the mysteriousness.

    Thanks for entering.
    Sorry for failing to follow the word limit..
    you won’t be included in judging.


    • Carpe Noctem
      December 18, 2007
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      Awwww man. I miscounted. Thought I had 16. Oh well. Thanks anyway.


  • nonya
    December 15, 2007
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    You cant leave me with these people!!!!!


    • Carpe Noctem
      December 15, 2007
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      lol Well it'll be October before I do ANYTHING, so you'll be in college by then. lol