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Sea Of Life





In the sea of life,
I’m doing the backstroke

knowing-
                it’s,  s
                        i
                        n
                        k
                                or
                                      ~~~swim~~~





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Prompt; Where am I

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    A very interesting take on prompt - the style is very intriguing and the words are a little bland but lead nicely to more thoughts. Nicely crafted.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • PsychoticallyInsane
    December 15, 2007
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    Good Poem, It's nice.


  • Shipwreck
    December 15, 2007

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    this is a bizarre poem, yet i think its effective as because of its sentemental unique value it will stick in my mind. there are possible interpretations of this. i think the visual setting adds to the idea of death and survival. i get a strong sense of will power here . gr8 poem