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Froot Loops

Drowning in a bowl of psychedelic
medication of fruit loops --
valium, laxitives
acid, ecstasy and xanax

A contest entry

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  • noiseandkisses
    December 18, 2007

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    FRUITLOOPS!

    i like this. its like fruitloops and then the drugs.
    i clicked on the poem because i was like " =O fruitloops, wtf?!!?" and i noticed its only 4 lines and i was like how would she talk about fruitloops in 4 lines and now i know that you are amazing.
    ily<3


  • Naridill gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Ohh.. intriguing take ans very personal grip on reality [if it exists] Nicely prompted.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    laxatives???holy shit....i mean ok..unique take on the prompt here. best wishes to you in the contest.


    tory