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Tall Oaks Drive

Dwelling the fast lane
Expressway going south
Have view over travel
As life speeds by me

A contest entry

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  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Indeed a nicely penned imagery stricken piece. Very well crafted and holds itself nicely within the prompt.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • crimsondew
    December 15, 2007
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    Wow

    Intense imagery....love it!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    December 15, 2007
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    indeed a great take on the prompt. best wishes to you in the contest,

    tory