Where are you ?
Where am I ?
Where are we ?
Together
A contest entry
- Where are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just be honest. i was very bored .:]
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you have a talent
you have a real talent for an impactueus last line
i like the form of the poem
all questions followed by an answer
i also like the way the question seemingly answers everything but in a litral sence could be said to answer nothing and at best the penulitmate line
nice interpritation of the promt too
good luck with the contest, hope you get a trophy
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Very questionable and intriguing but questionable itself. Nicely penned.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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vg i like ut
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again I like the tone... not bad at all for a beginning... this is interesting for certain, It could be a question and answer at the end or just a statement of how you are where you need to be found... simple, but kind of profound... I'd like to see more to this... there's a bit of an unfinished feel
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Rock on.
I loved this poem, to me, the way i read it the first time, there was hilarity to it. But reading it another time, I love it, though short, it means alot. Like two people lost in a dark abyss, can't find one another, but they are together. lol. This is a cool poem. And if i have not taken the poem for what it means, please, enlighten me. =)
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well done great take on the prompt. best wishes i in the contest.
Tory
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Short but yet simple. I like!!!
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I wish we were together!
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