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I Got Dat Fire

Blowin' dem trees,
make me feel at ease.
Gettin' my mind right,
make me feel alright.
Take it to the head,
as I sit on my bed.
Friends is near,
laughter fills my ear.
"Gimme a shotty" I say,
wantin' my troubles to go away.
Inhale it deep,
can't waste, dis shit aint cheap.
Smokin' on dis Cali dro,
got me feelin' like, whoa.
Start feelin' good now,
Damn we smoked dat whole B, wow.
Man lets light another,
dat shit fire like no other.

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  • WuzGood
    August 1
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    haha, love this, great write, thanks and good luck!

  • Girl, if I keep reading this you might send me back twenty years.

  • Sikaria
    May 2
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    Really good.

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    January 30, 2008
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    very nice flow and yeah this shit aint cheap. keep on blazin too


  • Manish
    January 18, 2008
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    Good piece of writing! Keep on writing! Like the old style!


  • PoetBoy2008
    December 17, 2007

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    NICE

    That's what you call a way with words that was pretty good rhyming and description. lol. my fav part was "inhale it deep, can't waste, this shit aint cheap" keep it up.

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