I am nobody-
having one skin,
growing feeble
with a dying heart
I am love's,
orphan
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Naridill.
300 points, ended December 18, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful. I have indeed been to that place, and am glad to have moved on from there, but at the same time, will never forget. Your lament encompasses the desolate feeling of abandonment, and does so without briefly, succinctly. Thanks for this expression.
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What an ending - this is exquisite, I love the reflection on yourself. The imagery and such simple but hard wording. Nicely penned.
Thanks for entering.
Much luck.
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Oh this one speaks to me.... my favourite quote is "light and shadow by turns, but always love"... yeah... beautiful.
~ Nicolette
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you get ther attention of the readers thats for sure, food luck mm
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lol Marchie...guess you can say this is an extension to that poem I put in your contest.... for ya
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I was just reading that Emily Dickenson poem: "I am nobody, who are you?"....
good luck in the contest!
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I changed life's orphan to love's orphan...which do you like?
let me know
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life is love...so I prefer love...always
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